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    dots Submission Name: A love Long Lostdots
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    Author: janekostman09
    Elite Ratio:    1.55 - 96/54/44
    Words: 258
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       I lost a relationship with my daughter and now I am slowly getting to know her...


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    dotsA love Long Lostdots
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    Oh----well I know I've been blessed
    with this love thats been gone for far to long and its been hard holding on when just thinking of you reminded me of heart broken love songs.

    But now that I got this chance
    it seem like I'm in a mess but i know sometimes I can be wrong... and being away from you for so long wasn't my choice but it made me strong.....And baby--

    I'm stuck on you, <oh --oh--oh-->
    had my fair share of being blue,
    Oh --- Oh --- Oh---- stuck on you---
    you and me baby-----oh---oh--oh
    Just know I'm stuck on you


    You know I'm so happy now we get our start,
    with an amazing friendship of a mother and daughter that's restored, now I got a joy within my heart....


    Cause I'm stuck on you, <oh --oh--oh-->
    had my fair share of being blue,
    Oh --- Oh --- Oh---- stuck on you---
    you and me baby-----oh---oh--oh
    Just know I'm stuck on you

    oh--------I know I don't know you too well
    all I have are memories that caused me so my hell--But all you should know is
    that I love you, And I need you
    And ------oh---oh--oh

    Cause I'm stuck on you, <oh --oh--oh-->
    had my fair share of being blue,
    Oh --- Oh --- Oh---- stuck on you---
    you and me baby-----oh---oh--oh
    Just know I'm stuck on you

    Yeah I'm stuck on you
    oh--oh--oh
    stuck on you




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      This is like a song of joy at a renewed relationship. I know what it's like to loose contact with a child of your own.

    Nice work, Jane!
    | Posted on 2011-08-23 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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