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    dots Submission Name: Brokendots
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    Author: Toadslayer
    ASL Info:    35/Female/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 32/38/15
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 374
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 277



    Description:
       Heart break.


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    dotsBrokendots
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    All my edges curled and frayed,
    as the nighttime turns to day.

    I am inside out, my heart exposed,
    with so many nights of fears and hopes.

    And now I'm left here with myself,
    wondering if you'd ever been there at all.




    Submitted on 2011-08-23 20:17:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I dunno. You got something going here but why does the rhyming stop in the last verse? I think it should rhyme too to make this feel complete.
    | Posted on 2011-08-24 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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