Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Archangel Margileldots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 694
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 439



    Description:
       From a meditation I recently had. Happy Day Peaceful Smiles to Share ;-)


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsArchangel Margileldots
    -------------------------------------------


    Deep & Vibrant
    Lavender Colors
    Freed In All Hearts
    Mothers

    Heartfelt Color Vibrant
    Green
    A Hue Before Never
    Seen
    ReconnectINg what I've
    Been

    For IN the NOW I AM
    Reconstructed
    Soul As ONE Is
    Constructed

    Swirling Skirt Cosmos
    Archangel Margilel
    Rings Vibrant Light
    Ascenscion Bell




    Submitted on 2011-08-24 16:50:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I like the colors used. It's like one of those angel paintings. But I dunno: Archangel Margilel? Did things change in heaven? :) I don't know any archangel by that name. I only know: Gabriel, Michael, Raphael, Uriel, Chamuel, Jophiel, and Zadkiel. Though the last three might be known by different names but not Margilel...
    | Posted on 2011-08-25 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      i find this piece rather interesting...still digesting it...

    but don't like the caps...i think it detracts...think it would work as well with normal font, and lower case...

    it is like reconnecting with a self from the past, before children and commitments and just plain growing up and older...back when i was free and dancing and my skirt was swirling.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-08-24 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    192250

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Commencement written by Ramneet
    Stretto written by saartha
    Lunch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Bre-anna written by Daniel Barlow
    To the Epilogue written by HisNameIsNoMore
    ME written by jjd
    All Time Low written by Janesaddiction
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Skulls Beyond the Palisade written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Blood to Plowshares written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The Last to Walk the Earth written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Broken Promises written by S.A.M.
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    A Fire! A Knife! A Black Crow Calls! written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    Everyone written by poetotoe
    Instances written by hyproglo
    untitled written by Chelebel
    The Search written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Limbo written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Love and Solitaire written by HisNameIsNoMore
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I'm here written by BloodtornAngel
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Dirge of Nostalgia written by HisNameIsNoMore
    "other people don't get that" written by Daniel Barlow
    Bam (Awash). written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry