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Archangel Margilel


Author: Epiphany
ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342 /2139 /390
Words: 50
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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From a meditation I recently had. Happy Day Peaceful Smiles to Share ;-)


Archangel Margilel



Deep & Vibrant
Lavender Colors
Freed In All Hearts
Mothers

Heartfelt Color Vibrant
Green
A Hue Before Never
Seen
ReconnectINg what I've
Been

For IN the NOW I AM
Reconstructed
Soul As ONE Is
Constructed

Swirling Skirt Cosmos
Archangel Margilel
Rings Vibrant Light
Ascenscion Bell




Submitted on 2011-08-24 16:50:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like the colors used. It's like one of those angel paintings. But I dunno: Archangel Margilel? Did things change in heaven? :) I don't know any archangel by that name. I only know: Gabriel, Michael, Raphael, Uriel, Chamuel, Jophiel, and Zadkiel. Though the last three might be known by different names but not Margilel...
| Posted on 2011-08-25 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
  i find this piece rather interesting...still digesting it...

but don't like the caps...i think it detracts...think it would work as well with normal font, and lower case...

it is like reconnecting with a self from the past, before children and commitments and just plain growing up and older...back when i was free and dancing and my skirt was swirling.

jacob
| Posted on 2011-08-24 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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