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    dots Submission Name: Archangel Margileldots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 681
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 439



    Description:
       From a meditation I recently had. Happy Day Peaceful Smiles to Share ;-)


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    dotsArchangel Margileldots
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    Deep & Vibrant
    Lavender Colors
    Freed In All Hearts
    Mothers

    Heartfelt Color Vibrant
    Green
    A Hue Before Never
    Seen
    ReconnectINg what I've
    Been

    For IN the NOW I AM
    Reconstructed
    Soul As ONE Is
    Constructed

    Swirling Skirt Cosmos
    Archangel Margilel
    Rings Vibrant Light
    Ascenscion Bell




    Submitted on 2011-08-24 16:50:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the colors used. It's like one of those angel paintings. But I dunno: Archangel Margilel? Did things change in heaven? :) I don't know any archangel by that name. I only know: Gabriel, Michael, Raphael, Uriel, Chamuel, Jophiel, and Zadkiel. Though the last three might be known by different names but not Margilel...
    | Posted on 2011-08-25 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      i find this piece rather interesting...still digesting it...

    but don't like the caps...i think it detracts...think it would work as well with normal font, and lower case...

    it is like reconnecting with a self from the past, before children and commitments and just plain growing up and older...back when i was free and dancing and my skirt was swirling.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-08-24 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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