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    dots Submission Name: Love or Notdots

    Author: MissieRay3
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Just expressing how I feel right now. Glad to have a good man in my life.

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    dotsLove or Notdots

    He loves me
    He loves me not
    Is the question I've asked my whole life
    Rather with my dad or with a man
    It was always a question
    He loves me
    He loves me not
    Is no longer a needed question
    I know he loves me
    I know he cares
    I know he'll always be there
    He loves me
    I love him

    Submitted on 2011-08-24 20:49:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know just what you mean with this piece. It's amazing to feel like the sun is shining, when you use to think it was going to rain forever.
    | Posted on 2011-08-25 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]

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