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    dots Submission Name: Humbleddots
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    Author: armand
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    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       This is a rough draft of something I want to be bigger any feedback would be great Remember this is only an idea


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    dotsHumbleddots
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    Angel, angel
    What have we done
    Faceless names
    In heaven and guns


    Angel,angel
    Where do we go
    Nameless faces
    Caught under the rocks
    In heaven and guns




    Submitted on 2011-08-25 16:58:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      In Heaven and guns? Hmmm
    Well I guess those are two things that you put faith in...am I right? You put faith in a life after this one...and you put faith in guns in order to help sustain this life; protection. Huh. That offers up a nice theme, I think.
    It's kind of ironic; even though you have faith in this afterlife, you still rely on guns in order for you to feel safe. It kind of puts your faith in perspective.
    But guns also end lives so you have a new variable to take into account.
    We can justify our killings with an afterlife as well. We can be comforted when our loved ones are taken by people's cruelty.
    But when is our faith tested...on the battle field when we're killing and dying...in our homes when we're grieving over the loss of someone who was killed by a gun, and then buying a gun for protection?
    It's all very ironic.

    And then you have Faceless names and nameless faces. I like that perspective...very nice.

    I think you have a good start to something.

    Matt
    | Posted on 2011-08-25 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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