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    dots Submission Name: Am I empty Or am I full?dots
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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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       It's about mybest friend, no kidden right?


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    dotsAm I empty Or am I full?dots
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    I wake up everyday around the same time, wasted half the day, waste the rest sitting around doing nothing, My life feels empty but someting keeps me here, something I cant even explain. The fact that you take the time to make me smile, that you lsten when no one else hears, you make that feeling of feeling alone fade away like my tears, your my best friend. No one will change that, We had our fights and our rough patches, but in the end we came out on top. You do know partly what I'm about youcan read me like no one else, you know it all, but yet so unaware of how much You need me, and of how much I need you. We are past a relationship, we are past a friendship, deeper and thicker then blood, we flow in each others viens, we are of one soul. My counter part, my better half, my worse half, My one and only. You are my reason, you are my shine, you are my grass growing beneath my feet, the wind I feel along my neck that simply breeze, is all i need, all to remind me your always here, maybe not in human form maybe not in any form, but in my heart you stay, in my mind you stay forever. I might be empty, empty of darkness and filled with your love, with our love. It's the only thing that means anything to me right now, and forever.




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