[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Blanketdots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 416
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 128


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    innumerable intertwining strings of fabric create negative distances that hold onto my shoulders and the weight of my discomfort

    Submitted on 2011-08-26 11:55:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      This is truly a WOW !!! Great lines !!
    | Posted on 2011-09-23 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write. like the fabrics are everyday events that no matter what toward the end of the day will be there and cover you up in the discomforts that is life. "create negative distances" is powerful. Like the reflecting of the day that is no longer happening to you but still linger in the "distances" Great words with a greater meaning. Very thought provoking.

    | Posted on 2011-08-29 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]

    the contradiction works so well here...the blanket usually thought of as giving us warmth and a secure feeling....but here it is like the blanket covers up the insecurities..and underneath it, we feel separated from ourselves...and from others..not a security blanket but something that is between us and them.

    cool write.
    | Posted on 2011-08-26 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    AI written by poetotoe
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    Push written by JanePlane
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Bond written by saartha
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Fasade written by jackz
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Linger written by saartha
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Summer written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]