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    dots Submission Name: Blanketdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    innumerable intertwining strings of fabric create negative distances that hold onto my shoulders and the weight of my discomfort




    Submitted on 2011-08-26 11:55:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is truly a WOW !!! Great lines !!
    | Posted on 2011-09-23 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write. like the fabrics are everyday events that no matter what toward the end of the day will be there and cover you up in the discomforts that is life. "create negative distances" is powerful. Like the reflecting of the day that is no longer happening to you but still linger in the "distances" Great words with a greater meaning. Very thought provoking.




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    | Posted on 2011-08-29 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]
      wow

    the contradiction works so well here...the blanket usually thought of as giving us warmth and a secure feeling....but here it is like the blanket covers up the insecurities..and underneath it, we feel separated from ourselves...and from others..not a security blanket but something that is between us and them.

    cool write.
    | Posted on 2011-08-26 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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