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    dots Submission Name: Dear Prudence Remixdots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 938
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    Bytes: 660



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       Dear Prudence open up your eyes
    Dear Prudence see the sunny skies
    The wind is low the birds will sing
    That you are part of everything
    Dear Prudence won't you open up your eyes?

    Look around round round
    Look around round round
    Oh look around

    Dear Prudence let me see you smile
    Dear Prudence like a little child
    The clouds will be a daisy chain
    So let me see you smile again
    Dear Prudence won't you let me see you smile?
    -The Beatles-


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    dotsDear Prudence Remixdots
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    You aren't supposed to stay inside.
    When there's so much around.
    You should be outside in the sun
    instead hiding in the ground.

    You are much more than you offer
    to those silly little boys.
    Dear Prudence.
    don't you know you're worth more?

    I wish I could show you
    the sun always shines.
    But you rather bury the truth
    and move on with the lies.

    I wish you could see
    what it's like to be a girl.
    Dear Prudence,
    there's more in the world.

    look around.
    look around.
    look around.




    Submitted on 2011-08-26 23:15:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Why is that that those without confidence can't really hear what those who love them tell them? :D maybe with time and patience your words reach them. I love your work!
    | Posted on 2011-08-30 00:00:00 | by CrazyGinger | [ Reply to This ]
      
    i say sometimes: it's hard being a woman.

    it's hard finding yourself in the scheme of things without all the labels that go with it. whether it is confidence or surety or the absolute knowledge that you can do anything if you set your mind on it. there will always be barriers that you have to knock down.

    yes. i am so much more then what i think i have to offer to the boys. but damn. they can hurt my feelings sometimes.

    prudent, this.

    i likey.
    | Posted on 2011-08-27 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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