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    dots Submission Name: Im Your Unwanted Lovedots
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    Author: unwantedlove20
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 16/12/11
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       I pity myself... Cnt believe I still love yuh :'(


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    dotsIm Your Unwanted Lovedots
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    Dont tell me not to cry
    When the tears are already flowing
    Dont tell me to forget him
    When hes the only thing I wanna think about
    Don't tell me not to let him break my heart
    When I've already begun for the for the pieces
    Don't tell me he's not worth it
    When i'd give everything up to have him again
    When i'd give up everything to be enough
    Enough for him
    And only him

    Ive told myself time and time again
    That love is all in the head
    That all my heart is supposed to do is
    Pump blood through my veins
    But then why is it when I see you
    Either physically or in my head
    My head doesnt hurt
    But my heart does




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