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    dots Submission Name: Hellish worlddots
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    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsHellish worlddots
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    What I thought was true is now a lie,
    Nothing left to do but force death inside,
    How to feel remorse,
    Kindle the broken emotion of love inside,
    Watch it burn and blaze,
    Then douse it with water once again..
    Anything you do or say,
    Just ends up coming back in my memories,
    Promise me you'll never leave,
    But walk away..
    Don't understand this pain I feel,
    Knowing this world cant be real....
    Hell is bound of torture and hate,
    With my pain...
    I can relate..
    Tear me down and break me in two,
    Never wanted to be without you.
    Hope for a day that will never come,
    Because you were my first,
    In my heart you are always number 1




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