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    dots Submission Name: Value Hesitationdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    a taste of the wind after impact the first thought afteer feeling
    In this moment it is enough to breathe




    Submitted on 2011-08-31 13:31:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      now i see why you commented on so many of my poems, your style is very like mine, our choice of words are different, but our ideas are the same. for example. i love how short this is. its not about how many words are in a poem, but how much you can convey to the reader.

    first poem in a while i truly 100% enjoyed, thanks
    | Posted on 2011-09-03 00:00:00 | by Mr.Ordinary | [ Reply to This ]
      "after"

    okay...wow...short but sweet--

    either the hurricane and after effects...or just surviving a tumultuous relationship...and afterwards it's
    "enough to breathe" just to have made it through...

    battered and bruised but with the heart still alive.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-08-31 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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