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    dots Submission Name: Where I'm Fromdots
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    Author: twiddo
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       This poem is about the way a particular group of people speak english.


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    dotsWhere I'm Fromdots
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    From where I'm from
    they don't say this or that,
    everyone knows it's 'dis' and 'dat'
    and if you dare know too much
    like me, you'll be jeered at.

    From where I'm from
    they don't say thanks,
    everyone knows it's 'fanks'
    and if you dare say thanks
    trust me you'll be jeered at.

    From where I'm from
    they don't say they or them
    everyone knows it's 'dey' or 'dem'
    and if you dare think different
    believe me you"ll be jeered at.

    That's the place where I am from
    and everyone knows its not this or that,
    nor is it thanks neither they nor them but,
    dis and dat and fanks and dey and dem.
    Only in the place that I am from.




    Submitted on 2011-09-01 00:21:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i remember when i was nine...

    moved from NY to Illinois...and man, was i made fun of because of the way i talked!

    i had idears...i sawr the ca...

    and dis was the truth....dat was how i talked.

    my parents used to get so aggravated at my cousin and me (he is from jersey)
    cause we would say dis and dat...

    memories

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-01 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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