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    dots Submission Name: The Tunedots
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    Author: blackdemigod13
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    dotsThe Tunedots
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    On the night of the full moon,
    I saw a man sing a tune.
    He was sad,
    And the tune was bad.
    He did not look glad,
    And to see me mad him mad.
    I would have seen what was wrong,
    But I was scared of his song.




    Submitted on 2011-09-02 09:26:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HORRIBLE JUST HORRIBLE!!!!!!!! LOL JK VERY GOOD ONE SYLLABLE POEM!!!

    LOVE CLIFFORD :)
    | Posted on 2011-09-02 00:00:00 | by kendraos3 | [ Reply to This ]


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