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    dots Submission Name: Sleepdots
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    Author: blackdemigod13
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    dotsSleepdots
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    sleep is a much need rest,
    it makes you feel at your best.
    it takes you to a place all your own,
    and makes you feel like you're not alone.




    Submitted on 2011-09-02 13:14:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like sleep but I also dont always get much since I got insomia.....it can be a blessing but it can also not be... I like this it is short sweet and to the point....
    | Posted on 2011-10-06 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]


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