Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Sleep


Author: blackdemigod13
Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 56 /60 /41
Words: 31
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
Total Views: 1387
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 172



Description:




Sleep



sleep is a much need rest,
it makes you feel at your best.
it takes you to a place all your own,
and makes you feel like you're not alone.




Submitted on 2011-09-02 13:14:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments


  I really like sleep but I also dont always get much since I got insomia.....it can be a blessing but it can also not be... I like this it is short sweet and to the point....
| Posted on 2011-10-06 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]


Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



192350