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Submission Name: Sleep dots

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Author:	blackdemigod13
Elite Ratio:	1.52 - 56/60/41
Words:	31

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Sleep

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sleep is a much need rest,
it makes you feel at your best.
it takes you to a place all your own,
and makes you feel like you're not alone.

Submitted on 2011-09-02 13:14:25 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I really like sleep but I also dont always get much since I got insomia.....it can be a blessing but it can also not be... I like this it is short sweet and to the point....

| Posted on 2011-10-06 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.