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    dots Submission Name: Without Youdots
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    Author: janekostman09
    Elite Ratio:    1.55 - 96/54/44
    Words: 391
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWithout Youdots
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    Without You
    By Jane Sarah Gulley Kostman

    Ive been sitting here for a while now just wondering, just wishing, just praying

    Oh just thinking about so many things and Im unable to get my mind clear,

    Unable to erase all worries, all doubts and fear without you near.

    Oh without you ---- oh without you---Lord----without you near (2x)

    Oh without you things have been so complicated- been filing up with hatred and Im un feed

    And everything around me seems so life less- so meaningless without you

    And times going by so fast seems like nothing in this world is meant to last and

    All things around me are still fading before me in this world things have been so tainted

    Oh Lord you tell me to be still and Just know that you are God,

    And as I close my eyes, as I am trying to be still, to let my heart feel you, breath you in,

    All I can see is my life flashing before me, remembering all the should of could of and would of and what ifs get me to giving in to ---------

    ******* just wondering, just wishing, just praying

    Oh just thinking about so many things and Im unable to get my mind clear,

    Unable to erase all worries, all doubts and fear without you near.

    Oh without you ---- oh without you---Lord----without you near (2x)

    Oh Lord I know that I cant live cant breathe cant go on without you

    So will you please tell me where I can find the open window where your hiding

    Cause all I see are doors closing while Im-----

    ******* Just wondering, just wishing, just praying

    Oh just thinking about so many things and Im unable to get my mind clear,

    Unable to erase all worries, all doubts and fear without you near.

    Oh without you ---- oh without you---Lord----without you near (2x)

    09-2-11




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      hey what's up are you,talking about christ our lord
    I think i got it if not let me know
    | Posted on 2011-09-02 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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