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Floating Fairy ~*~ Wishing Willow ~*~


Author: Epiphany
ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342 /2139 /390
Words: 75
Class/Type: Poetry /Nature
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A piece inspired by a floating helicopter willow ~*~

With Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)


Floating Fairy ~*~ Wishing Willow ~*~



Floating Fairy
Wishing Willow ~*~

Summer breeze
Uplifts ~*~
Floating Fairy
Wishing Willow ~*~

Soft as a pillow
Extraordinary
Shifts
With ease ~*~

Wind please ~*~
Drifts ~*~
Light, Merry
Gusts Billow ~*~

Floating Fairy
Wishing Willow ~*~

Magical Flight ~*~
Into the Light ~*~

Touching
Divinity ~*~
Everywhere

High above ~*~
Without
A care

INFINITE
Miracles ~*~
Interlacing Spericals 0()0

Floating Fairy
Wishing Willow ~*~




Submitted on 2011-09-02 17:49:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Shifts
With ease

I loved that line, shifts with ease, how original! Can be said of the entire piece.

| Posted on 2011-09-05 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
  One word: Lovely
| Posted on 2011-09-02 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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