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    dots Submission Name: Floating Fairy ~*~ Wishing Willow ~*~dots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 755
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       A piece inspired by a floating helicopter willow ~*~

    With Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)

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    dotsFloating Fairy ~*~ Wishing Willow ~*~dots

    Floating Fairy
    Wishing Willow ~*~

    Summer breeze
    Uplifts ~*~
    Floating Fairy
    Wishing Willow ~*~

    Soft as a pillow
    With ease ~*~

    Wind please ~*~
    Drifts ~*~
    Light, Merry
    Gusts Billow ~*~

    Floating Fairy
    Wishing Willow ~*~

    Magical Flight ~*~
    Into the Light ~*~

    Divinity ~*~

    High above ~*~
    A care

    Miracles ~*~
    Interlacing Spericals 0()0

    Floating Fairy
    Wishing Willow ~*~

    Submitted on 2011-09-02 17:49:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    With ease

    I loved that line, shifts with ease, how original! Can be said of the entire piece.

    | Posted on 2011-09-05 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      One word: Lovely
    | Posted on 2011-09-02 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]

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