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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
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    Perhaps the cost doesn't exceed the value . The prospects there where myriad . Where do you go to escape the elusive delusions of your psychic quandary ? The ramifications of inductive collusion make writing a chore which requires extrapolations in progressive dynamics . The allusions of paradoxical analogies multifaceted conjectures often have more depth than the hypothetical dynamic intentions can pervade . I to would like to get more out of the plausiblities of problematic diversity . What were you trying to accomplish ? The diversity of possibility makes self oriented interjection seem a pragmatic enigma to ourselves . To receive unity I must conceive the totality of my cognation . The dog was wearing its collar . The rhythms of logic may seem impractical although aesthetically pleasing . There are many ways to exercise the perplexing quagmires of psychic revelry . Since I don't have another outlet I must attempt to succeed through cognitive diligence . Their impetus was not clear . The whole picture was not necessary for the production of viable assumptions . I don't know whether to go or stay home . The dialectics of rational induction often seem almost visible . Psychology is not an empirical science . Transience may seem a convenient quality . The first matrix seemed similar to the third in the progression . If I could I would fashion a legitimate conjecture to help mitigate the discrepancies in these arguments . I find I have worries for my relative clarity in the midst of these almost catalytic litigations . The site for the new well was carefully mapped . I find it difficult to satisfy the dictates of my conscience . A lot of people are distressed by the estranged condition of their moral ethics . The clarity of criticism creates credibility , comprehension can cause conducive consciousness . Multifariously versatile obnoxiously obsessed protuberant demonstratively cajole deviant affectionate fondle caress. English is a colorfully diverse and versatile language . Parallel thoughts like parallel lines carry similar veins of reasoning in almost identical directions . The picture forming seemed to be a synthesis of the almost kaleidoscopic torrents of symbolical regalia . It's not convenience it's the spontaneity of intrinsic expedience which dictates . The light house stood out stark and ominous amidst the torrential rain and flashing lighting of the stormy weather .Anxiety is often caused by an accumulation of unresolved delusions . If the tone of that man's voice is any indication we are not going to have an easy time convincing him to give up his old records collection . Sometimes having something is not as exciting as you thought it would be before you owned it . The occasion was just another new moment in time . The mechanism was a miniature scale model of the larger machine . The man's perception of the situation appeared quite shallow and incomplete . Belief is a relative state that often lacks objective clarity . The monolithic precipice is probably not as steep as it looks . The heights of sanity are a lofty and precarious perch indeed . He was not conscious of the collaborations of his enemies clandestine collusions . The magnitude of the problem put it outside the realm of my perception . The angel was a vision of resplendent beauty as it hovered in mid air above the knoll . I don't think you understood what I meant . I sincerely ment what I said about the sorcerer . I will succeed through cognitive diligence . To say the state of mankind's metaphysique is an imaginary condition is a gross denial of evolutional principle . What then is the nature of problematic hypothesis , or the personification of positive prosthesis ? I don't mean to embarrass the perpetrators of theological indenture but perhaps this is not pragmatically aesthetic . The athlete carried the torch with grace and solemn devotion almost as if on a mystical sojourn . The quality of existence may not transcend the tenacious transience of time ; then again perhaps the exogamy of homogeny will produce the ultimate successor . Under our political system the privilege of freedom is inalienably granted to all unless abridged by due process of law . If you attempt to unlawfully abridge my freedom I will file a prejudice against you . I am more wholly concerned for my anonymity than I am with the ideology of your evangelist . I know I would rather be self sufficient than deterred by the ulterior motives of political impetus . Though I know I am is more than I may ever be I like to think I could . Through extrapolation one can enhance their vision of the realms of possibility .





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      through cognitive diligence

    The whole picture was not necessary for the production of viable assumptions . I don't know whether to go or stay home . The dialectics of rational induction often seem almost visible

    I love this. It is what I guess I am working with now. Trying to maintain focus while accepting grace.

    Or that's what I get from it. That is how I react.

    Reminds me a lot of V from the movie V for Vendetta.

    Vocabulary is amazing. I see strings of thought like this a lot but it is definately the use of vocabulary that sets this apart. The ideas within the piece would be enough to absorb.

    This definately is masterful.
    Humbled me.
    Thank you for sharing.
    | Posted on 2011-09-19 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Ahem, OK, here goes...

    Your mind takes in too much. It jumps around. Like mine, perhaps your mind has a breadth so great that its depth is as yet unexplored. I know a little about a lot and not very much about anything. My attention span is simply not equipped for long bouts of study in any one particular subject. As a result I often envy people who are prodigious in one finely-tuned area of specialization.

    You, like me, might also envy those who can think in a straight and linear fashion; people whose minds are like intricately tuned machines, all polished and ordered and gleaming their bright metal splendour. Therefore, as you say, logic holds a certain allure. So you try to map, to classify, to give things a mental dewey-decimal system, but alas! your mind has a decidedly emotional bent that prevents you from approaching any and all subjects without superimposing a personal element.

    On viable assumptions: do you need the whole picture in order to form opinions? Do we ever have a full picture, or do pieces fall into order a bit at a time, each answer only opening up more questions?
    I once heard it said that "life is like putting multiple puzzles together at the same time," and I think this is apt. Perception is 9/10ths of the law, and as perception changes, so therefore, do opinion and worldview.

    The clarity of criticism creates credibility , comprehension can cause conducive consciousness. An excellent line!! We are expected to criticize. The rest, according to the world, is all the fluffy stuff, the anecdotal rather than the empirical, and the anecdotal, let's just face it, is not en vogue in scientific circles. Yes, Psychology is not an empirical science and neither are we!

    It would be pretty neat if we could actually make a computer model for our thoughts, and I think if we could the results would be complexly beautiful. But would they look like webs, mandalas, or more like fractals? Hmmm....

    Out there, in the world, people do not value passion. They value things like efficiency and impassivity. Such is the crux of a major problem for those of us who do not fit between the gears of society's well-oiled machine.

    Possibility is often more interesting than reality.

    That's what I've gotten out of this so far.

    The small criticism I have to offer is that it might help to divide this into paragraphs. With the staggeringly diverse vocabulary and cramped script both, it's a lot to take in. But I appreciate having to go to the dictionary.

    Take Care,
    Erin
    | Posted on 2011-09-06 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not smart enough to get it, give me some time I will read it again tomorrow, maybe, you have this way of easing me into your work like and I start getting into it and feel like it starts to wobble a bit and then I follow it and then BOOM! mi d b own a d I c n't thi k straigh an ,

    Ok I will try to understand this piece, even if only one day when my mind reaches level epsilon 59. I am sure it must be some insane IQ boost or something that is required for me to comprehend.

    so yes this may not be constructive in any way but, I respect this piece for it's sheer power over my sense of thinking.
    | Posted on 2011-09-05 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]


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