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    Author: Black Rock Tractor
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    its not just that the
    highway grass is there, threshing my
    mobility, but more its that it isn't
    sympathetic. Fucking highway grass.




    Submitted on 2011-09-03 02:31:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Rules of the Road: Stay on the pavement or get 4WD.

    Since when did any "driver" follow the rules?

    Maybe the grass ain't on the highway but in the driver.

    Phil
    | Posted on 2011-09-04 00:00:00 | by phil askew | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this! It's not that it's there, it's that it doesn't care; fucking grass!

    I think you conveyed that perfectly!

    Great write,

    Matt.
    | Posted on 2011-09-03 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so very good. 'threshing my mobility'.

    and man, how the grass can be so fucking indifferent. unsympathetic. the nerve.

    ha. i just gave my landlord my rent check and he's all: what happend to the grass?

    it's like 3 feet high. (not really. but it might as well be).

    i told him i just didn't have it in me anymore. it's a bitch to mow and twice the bitch when it gets out of hand.

    but this can be more than just about grass. and that's admirable.

    anyhoo...
    | Posted on 2011-09-03 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      ha ha to what Bruce said...roll it and smoke it and maybe we can tolerate it.

    short and sweet...and wow, i relate so much to this right now...i live way out in the sticks..and all roads leading to my place are right now so overgrown with highway grass that it has become treacherous...the vision is so impaired by it...and the roads so narrow and windy.....

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-03 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      I know just how you feel . Maybe if we roll it and smoke it it will seem more affably congenial .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-09-03 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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