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    dots Submission Name: To-daydots
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    Author: Rainwater
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 7/29/19
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    Description:
       I fancy the word "to-day". I need to be less of a hormonal teenager. Pardon.


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    Apologies
    But I am tired to-day
    I am worn to-day
    The vultures are circling me to-day




    Submitted on 2011-09-04 21:28:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      do you have anything else to say today
    any new words with which to play
    or prank the cosmos as it melts
    then pulses like a second self

    Just what your work inspired me to write.
    | Posted on 2011-09-05 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm well i guess i understand what you mean by vultures circling you. being a teen is never easy and sometimes you just feel worn out and tired. hopeless even. but thats what writing is for i guess, releasing your inner emotions about the difficulties you face.

    and btw no need to apologize for that

    cheers
    Kat
    | Posted on 2011-09-04 00:00:00 | by moonlitsky | [ Reply to This ]


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