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    dots Submission Name: i almost forgot to tell youdots
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    Author: isabella
    Elite Ratio:    5.56 - 803/905/472
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       for olivia...


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    dotsi almost forgot to tell youdots
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    life isn't perfect. it's barely round. and it gets harder to read as time rolls by. but sing your heart out anyway. every little bit of it. let your hair-down-soul carry on beyond the distance. someone will brush up against it sooner or later. listen to the early bird's song. get your knees dirty. tilt back your head every now and again (it'll let the sun collect up pieces of you).





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      I would like an "Almost" in the title.

    Enjoying these very much. Your touch has grown exquisite and light.
    | Posted on 2012-11-20 00:00:00 | by Vancrown | [ Reply to This ]
      This is little feet, this is gently gently. It's beautiful that it stubs a toe but rubs it better and encourages a little bravery at the same time.

    There is a freedom in these words, the cage is there but the door is open and though there is a coming to that cage there is a going too because its a big world and at times its a hard world but it should be explored a little knowing the safe place is there too, if you need it.

    I like this.
    | Posted on 2012-03-02 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]
      i really enjoyed this piece! its so fun and free...you really capture the correct mindset to possess in this life. yes, life is hard, but we must revel in the joys of everyday life. at the end of the piece i almost feel born again. lol


    great job!

    -jp
    | Posted on 2012-01-04 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof | [ Reply to This ]
      i really enjoyed this piece! its so fun and free...you really capture the correct mindset to possess in this life. yes, life is hard, but we must revel in the joys of everyday life. at the end of the piece i almost feel born again. lol


    great job!

    -jp
    | Posted on 2012-01-04 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof | [ Reply to This ]
      Life isn't perfect and neither are we :) I hope the sun does lighten up your spirits.

    Absolutely Lost
    | Posted on 2011-09-06 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this isabella....i like the idea of appreciating the small stuff..
    but the whole almost round part...the carry on,
    the early bird part and the small things remind me so much of Santi...and her baby getting ready to emerge.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-05 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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