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    dots Submission Name: Love, Stilldots

    Author: Raindrops
    ASL Info:    25/f/Pennsylvania
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 184/213/288
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       For my hubby. Sept 6th, 2011

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    dotsLove, Stilldots

    Things have changed,
    We've gotten older
    We've grown stronger
    lost some fire

    But you still look at me
    with that look in your eyes
    and it makes my whole being

    I love to stare at you
    and see that grin
    that makes you uncomfortable
    every time.

    Getting lost in your eyes
    being drowned in love
    it still gives me chills
    to feel your hand on mine.

    You're on my mind
    all the time
    making me feel comforted
    and safe.

    To know that with
    all the shaky things in life
    This is still stable
    This is still going strong.

    With God's help
    we'll still be strong
    that nothing will tear us

    I love you
    I love everything about you
    I never stopped
    and never will.

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