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Love, Still

Author: Raindrops
ASL Info:    25/f/Pennsylvania
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Words: 140
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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For my hubby. Sept 6th, 2011

Love, Still

Things have changed,
We've gotten older
We've grown stronger
lost some fire

But you still look at me
with that look in your eyes
and it makes my whole being

I love to stare at you
and see that grin
that makes you uncomfortable
every time.

Getting lost in your eyes
being drowned in love
it still gives me chills
to feel your hand on mine.

You're on my mind
all the time
making me feel comforted
and safe.

To know that with
all the shaky things in life
This is still stable
This is still going strong.

With God's help
we'll still be strong
that nothing will tear us

I love you
I love everything about you
I never stopped
and never will.

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