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    dots Submission Name: ill never understand it?dots
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    Author: childoftears
    ASL Info:    20/female/CV Arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    1.02 - 3/24/39
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       So thankful for my love kevin<3 I love you forever baby<3


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    dotsill never understand it?dots
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    Our love is so diffrent so extrodinary,
    But something I will never ever understand how can he be with me?
    With so many problems with myself in and out,
    Yet he is by my side through and through he loves me without a doubt.

    Feel like crying everyday to much thinking yet here he stays,
    But always as I hoped he opens his arms up when I need him and there I lay.
    So many mood swings so many times I feel like dying,
    But there he is hearing those beautiful words of "everything will be okay"like a repeating chorus in a favorite song I sing.

    Feeling like the weight of the world on my shoulders or like I'm backed up in a corner and here he comes to my rescue,
    Always having that power to turn my horrible day a new.

    Never will I understand why he's with a mess like me but all I can do is thank god everyday,
    I'm so blessed I have you to always tell me everything will be okay.




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