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The little things


Author: Lynda
ASL Info:    26/F
Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 40 /45 /29
Words: 106
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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The little things



You kiss me in public
You brush back my hair
And when I'm away
You wish I was there

You tell me your secrets
You hold my hand tight
You look in my eyes
When you tell me goodnight

You smile so wide
You care how you look
You turn down the tv
When I'm reading a book

You hold me in the morning
We lie there in bed
You don't say a word
I hear the thoughts in your head

I don't know for sure
It's only been a short time
But I pray every night
That you'll always be mine




Submitted on 2011-09-07 21:12:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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