An Element of Toska I by Rhythmal

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Submission Name: An Element of Toska I dots

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Author:	Rhythmal
Elite Ratio:	2.63 - 29/35/31
Words:	27

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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An Element of Toska I dots

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The shadow echo

The whisper in the void

A distant melody

The harmony

Of a question unanswered

A memory forgotten

Submitted on 2011-09-08 13:03:05 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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It feels so smooth, delicate & simple.

I imagine a hall, with a small echo running through.

Then the harmony of a soft threnody.

I'm not sure why.

I just like really simple things but are so strong they make you think
And it's not even in a strong way, just...full of a different aspect...

Of some sort that is.

I liked this.
| Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
what an interesting paradox---"the harmony of a question unanswered"

better sometimes not to know...ignorance is bliss...a memory forgotten...

i really like this piece...it is a perfect example of "less is more"---

it hints; it is a whisper, a shadow...

and it is ours to see and hear what is between the lines.

jacob
| Posted on 2011-09-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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