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    dots Submission Name: An Element of Toska Idots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 29/38/36
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAn Element of Toska Idots
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    The shadow echo

    The whisper in the void

    A distant melody

    The harmony

    Of a question unanswered

    A memory forgotten




    Submitted on 2011-09-08 13:03:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It feels so smooth, delicate & simple.

    I imagine a hall, with a small echo running through.

    Then the harmony of a soft threnody.

    I'm not sure why.

    I just like really simple things but are so strong they make you think
    And it's not even in a strong way, just...full of a different aspect...

    Of some sort that is.

    I liked this.
    | Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      what an interesting paradox---"the harmony of a question unanswered"

    better sometimes not to know...ignorance is bliss...a memory forgotten...

    i really like this piece...it is a perfect example of "less is more"---

    it hints; it is a whisper, a shadow...

    and it is ours to see and hear what is between the lines.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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