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Judge Me


Author: Rhythmal
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29 /50 /47
Words: 100
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Judge Me



Judge Me, Bleed Me dry
leave Me on the floor to die
Judge Me
For We are nothing without the judgment of our Brothers
the consideration of Others.

Young or Old Friend or Foe
I don't care I don't know
Judge Me cruel or judge me kind
In the end
I'm all You'll find
Nothing more, nothing less
This Man's Soul was never blessed.


By gods above or all around
by spirits near or far unfound
No love above nor care at all
Below the same
no name nor empty stall for me to claim.




Submitted on 2011-09-08 13:09:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Brief yet right one.
I liked it.
Just what I needed today.
| Posted on 2011-09-12 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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