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    dots Submission Name: Blow, Blow, Thou Winter Winddots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 628
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       Stimulating its Spring. Joachim


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    dotsBlow, Blow, Thou Winter Winddots
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    Blow, Blow, Thou Winter Wind

    Blow, blow, thou winter wind.
    Thou art not so unkind
    As manís ingratitude;
    Thy tooth is not so keen,
    Because thou art not seen,
    Although thy breath be rude.
    Heigh-ho! sing, heigh-ho! unto the green holly:
    Most friendship is feigning, most loving mere folly:
    Then, heigh-ho, the holly!
    This life is most jolly.
    Freeze, freeze, thou bitter sky,
    That dost not bite so nigh
    As benefits forgot:
    Though thou the waters warp,
    Thy sting is not so sharp
    As friend rememberíd not.
    Heigh-ho! sing, &c.

    Act II, Scene 7 from As You Like It by William Shakespeare (1600)




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    ||| Comments |||
      i think Will would get a kick out of the comments on this piece.

    all he would need is for someone to say....

    Marlowe writes better.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-10 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      
    I admire the words you chose, but i felt you forced the piece and im a firm believer poetry should come from the heart, but you are a very talented writer, and it is a beautiful peace
    | Posted on 2011-09-09 00:00:00 | by AshleyDYoung | [ Reply to This ]
      good job! It has a smooth rhythm which is interwoven with the words. It is that i started reading it and broke my rhythm at the last fullstop. Nice job. :)
    | Posted on 2011-09-09 00:00:00 | by Iram | [ Reply to This ]


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