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    Author: isabella
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    'in the gloaming'
    was on my mind today.
    in the gloaming:
    before dark.
    almost night.
    after day. dusk.
    twilight.
    sun's just about gone down.

    it's when the nighthawk starts.
    it's when the nighthawk stops
    and starts again.







    Submitted on 2011-09-09 07:53:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It comes to me "in the gloaming hour" and I believe I've even written it like that.

    We're all standing in the same psychic waters, and with similar equipment with which to perceive the impenetrable mysteries that surround us.

    Strange that I hear it the same way. But comforting too.

    M~
    | Posted on 2012-11-20 00:00:00 | by Vancrown | [ Reply to This ]
      fucking zen. or maybe i've just had my allotment of caffeine for the day. Or maybe, this is just never something I've done well: to capture a moment, to stand it on edge and observe calmly the graceful mystery of all that is. I feel like there's more to this than just the surface - your words by their very nature point towards their crafter, the character observing, the moment of calm. And I've myself best experienced calm in the midst of a hurricane.

    But none of that may be true. The most important thing here is the quiet observation, the care taken. It's easy to forget how important that is.
    | Posted on 2012-05-06 00:00:00 | by lukewarm | [ Reply to This ]
      you still do 'just enough' well.

    this is just enough for me thank you, to give me a moment's introspection and thought as to the end of the day; as to what it means and what can be gained from having got there.

    i like the list of definitions because it is an aide memoir of sorts that provides a backhaul to other time(s).

    however, i would like to know what a nighthawk sounds like - i think that would be beneficial in a number of ways. can you find one singing on youtube?

    i trust that you are well?

    answers on a post card.

    take it easy mate,

    k
    | Posted on 2011-10-25 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]
      i don't feel we think about this enough...or stop to appreciate the end of the day enough....sunsets, gathering thoughts about the day, what we might have accomplished, what we might have seen...

    nature is so beautiful...Kaddish's new piece represents that...i guess poets do stop and smell the roses...wish others would too...

    there is beauty within reach of thoughts...and the visions we can see are something not to miss...

    in the gloaming of our lives we will wish we had paid more attention.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-09 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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