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    dots Submission Name: My Anthemdots

    Author: Undead37
    ASL Info:    15, F, Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.3 - 34/22/22
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsMy Anthemdots

    Cry a little harder,
    Hurt a little longer,
    Cut a little deeper,
    It only makes you stronger.

    Push down with the knife,
    Forget about your life,
    'Cause in this world of pain
    You just get hurt again.

    'Cause it won't be ok,
    Won't turn out like they say,
    And I can't fight the need;
    I must make myself bleed.

    But the blood seeps through my clothes,
    And now everyone knows
    That I cut a bit too deep,
    But perhaps now I can sleep.

    Submitted on 2011-09-09 12:13:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       Very Powerful Poem!!!!!!!! I Can feel the Feeling you put in this poem with the words you used!!!!!!!!! Good work.
    | Posted on 2012-02-10 00:00:00 | by Marybelle | [ Reply to This ]
      Tht is very powerful that how feel now days
    | Posted on 2011-09-19 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]
      Your words paint a vivid picture of very powerful feelings.
    | Posted on 2011-09-09 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]

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