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remember, learn, love, respect.

Author: scardnscared
ASL Info:    25/ DFW
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Words: 362
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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remember, learn, love, respect.

we live in this world
we burn through the atmosphere
and we cause all the chaos
and we cause all the pain
how can we take things back
when we've already spit them from our mouths
and as were cutting people and trees
we weep because we feel the victim is us
and the temps are always soaring
as are the planes that they were flying
and everyday is a memorial
not just for people but for things
and everything is always different after 24 hours
and the world always looks so strange
when your upside down
so how can we go back, how can we restart this
if we were ever given the chance to change
i hope we take it
with arms, eyes and hearts wide open
i hope we can forgive and learn to forget
because we live everyday like its our last
and one day it will be
because were burning through the sky
and the desert is sweeping in again
and the terrorist must never win
so please just listen to this plea
stop the injustice, stop the pain
lets drop our guns and live in peace
but peace is something not many of us will ever find
so lets strive on and live to better ourselves
lets save the planet before its too late
lets remember those lives lost on that fateful day.

how can you not remember anything
when they teach us not to forget
the force their pictures in our faces
they show us just how bad this world has gotten
the grass is turning into dust
and people are still burning the world up
theirs not a chance that god will give us
because we have become ignorant
and we have taken everything for granted
we need to learn to love again
and we need to learn to respect the world
and i know that i will never forget
because the pictures are burned across my brain.

so pause, reflect and remember
the past must never repeat
so lets move on and go forward
lets save us, not just for us
but for everyone for has died for us.

Submitted on 2011-09-09 23:08:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I can really feel ur emotion in this piece .. I can feel the yearning for things to get better & I can relate to that feeling
I think it was very readable & easy to follow it also had a great message .. Will be reading more from you :-)
| Posted on 2011-09-15 00:00:00 | by KiHoodie | [ Reply to This ]

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