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    dots Submission Name: Circumventions, related thereofdots
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    Author: trinityfinger
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 136/343/209
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       4am drunken ramblings.


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    Still, I confess
    there is much more to unearth
    and understand about certain connotations
    - the ability to breathe when cold envelops
    - the span of fingers broken to fit
    - the sure melody of grace when it overcomes
    the source of whatever pain it took to state
    the overwhelmingly obvious.

    There are limitations placed upon oneself.
    All that stress, confusion and sense of irony
    can be imposed with an iron composure.
    And there is a certainty to a body's angles
    when draped in the sunlight of forgiveness,
    each argument given over to philosophy
    between students of life and lore.

    I search for the definition of beauty.
    I often come up empty, but fervent in my belief
    that there is a way to define each parameter
    as if each molecule of thought depended
    on each previous interaction.

    This world is full of endless promises.
    The stars are uncountable, yet we, as dynamics beings
    strive to count the impossible, strive to find
    the perfection in a clearly prescribed
    hypothetical situation.

    Mark each word. Open the sky with probabilities.
    Scan the horizon with fluid prophecies
    born from reason and fire.


    11/09/11




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      the span of fingers broken to fit

    yesterday my sister accompanied me in my car. she looked at my pinky's and asked if they had been broken. They have not. But they look that way, crooked since birth, which she should have known. I reminded her. They look very weird, she told me, deformed. I said, yes but the fit perfectly around the finger that is parallel with it.

    That line was very personal to me. :) Think that wasn't exactly what you meant...still, the metaphor suits on a personal level.

    the sure melody of grace when it overcomes
    the source of whatever pain it took to state
    the overwhelmingly obvious

    This again, so so personal. It is truly as if you were whispering back at me from my prayers.

    This rest of this piece does not dissapoint. Through out the piece it is just as personal and I thankyou for sharing.

    Very nice.

    :)
    | Posted on 2011-09-22 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      the world is full of endless promise and beauty...it is about connotation...denotation is seeing things as they are, in black and white and accepting that definition...

    connotation is how we use the things we know...how we expand to accept that which we don't...

    maybe you threw this together..but it is good..it is quite nicely philosophical...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-10 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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