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    dots Submission Name: Life isdots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       There is life after this misery anyway. Joachim


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    dotsLife isdots
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    “God our Redeemer lives,
    And often from the skies.
    Looks down and watches all our dust,
    Till He shall bid it rise.”




    Submitted on 2011-09-12 01:03:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So the gamut of all we are or do amounts to dust from God's view! That goes wit the vanity lamentation of solomon. Swell
    | Posted on 2012-02-26 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and powerful, speaks of the finality that rests in God's voice, when we try to create changes it can never be lasting if God does not bid it to be so.. Powerful words here.
    | Posted on 2011-09-14 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]


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