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    dots Submission Name: Hey,dots

    Author: isabella
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       sometimes i find some weird shit in the archives...

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    look at the dragonfly porn!

    Those aren't dragonflies, they're damselflies.

    Cool, it's a heart shaped dance. They're making L.O.V.E.


    Dragonfly porn! Dragonfly porn!



    (The lesser gods always have something to say, don't they?)

    I put on sunglasses, turn my head towards the light, and listen to the chug-a-lug of our journey down river.

    (Dragonfly porn. Snort.)
    (Remember that.)

    Submitted on 2011-09-12 17:43:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      My girl snorts in her sleep and smiles right afterwards. Dont tell her that she smiles right afterwards, ok...but it is so freaking adorable. After reading this, I am going to ask her the next time she snorts in her sleep and smiles if she was dreaming of dragonfly porn lol.
    | Posted on 2012-04-27 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      I put on sunglasses, turn my head towards the light, and listen to the chug-a-lug of our journey down river.

    I love that line, that sassiness, that hurumphhh of spirit. It is like you are being the better person, turning the cheek, being indifferent to something in light of a more profound truth.

    Or i am wrong.
    This is what I got
    I appreciate the piece so so much.
    I adore the approach.

    Thanks so much for sharing,
    Have a great day.

    | Posted on 2011-12-14 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this being out of context because it leaves some room for analysis. one of those innocently corrupted kind of things where i feel like the person saying dragonfly porn doesn't mean it in such a terrible sense.

    our journey down river?

    sometimes i think that's what this whole site is. most of us are in a current trying desperately to find our place under light. nothing so bad, but we all tend to be a load of introspection.

    this one is quite interesting to say the least. i've gotta remember to keep an archive. you'rs seems infinitely interesting,

    | Posted on 2011-09-16 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      this one didn't really hit me much at first...but on rereads it is growing on me....maybe like wings...maybe i am becoming porny.
    | Posted on 2011-09-13 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      I always appreciate the minutiae within your macrocosm, the irreverent yet reverent humour, the freedom of your personality embedded in these words.

    Just some thoughts I usually keep tucked away.
    And that is that.
    | Posted on 2011-09-13 00:00:00 | by trinityfinger | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this formation of definitions and lesser-Gods.
    Like an unlearned n00b god lol.

    When I heard "dragonfly porn" I thought of explosive, alive, little bugs.
    and then "damselflies" just sounds like a melodramtic teenage movie with sexual tension, but no life.

    Maybe the lesser gods are more alive than their wiser brethren?

    It is funny what you find in the archives. Interesting write.

    | Posted on 2011-09-12 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]

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