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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFadedots
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    Be my friend, run away

    Stand on a hill and watch me fade
    Twist my spirit, bind my blade

    Find a way to keep me sane

    Question all who stand before
    Look past their lies into their core




    Submitted on 2011-09-13 12:00:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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