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My Love

Author: sandman
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My Love

Today in me a new spirit has
caressed me in my day
They have given me something to talk about
On this new day
The spirits of the new moon
Awakes another dark feature in me
I have broken silence of my darkest secret to my best friend and she is the one I would give my life to save hers

Today in a tranquil breathe
I feel her pain, and worry
I’m searching for the strength embedded in my soul to help her and keep her strong and take us to our dying day together

There is no one without the other
together we are always in our soul,
We love as one
my soul will protect you always

Walk down by the riverside
just you and me, our hands are holding
each other as we walk and dream

We had no worries
we had each other lost in the wonder
of each other’s touch.

I feel your thoughts and you feel my pain
The warmth of our touch can heal each other It’s called the circle
of what true love really means
our two lost souls in young adolescence found each other alone one night

Submitted on 2011-09-13 14:39:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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   This one brought me to tears and touched my heart. You write so beautifully in the way you express your emotions. I've often find my self relating to your writing's on a personal level, this one hit home with me today. That's what makes you such a great poet and one of my Favorite
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| Posted on 2011-09-13 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]

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