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    dots Submission Name: forever is neverdots
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    Author: xxalpal4everzxx
    ASL Info:    13/F/Pennsylvania
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 10/26/19
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
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    dotsforever is neverdots
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    Everyone says forever,
    But what does ďforeverĒ mean,
    You said we would be together,
    Guess that was just a dream,
    Forgotten after summer days ran away,
    Itís funny how youíre forever ended so fast,
    I was so naÔve up to this day,
    I just wanted forever to last,
    But it didnít unlike what you said,
    It ended two weeks ago,
    Now love is dead,




    Submitted on 2011-09-13 15:15:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      kinda depressing how love can be sometimes.. nicely written poem.
    | Posted on 2011-09-27 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]


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