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    dots Submission Name: I lieddots
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    Author: CrazyGinger
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 5/10/4
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsI lieddots
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    When i told you i didn't care
    You can't hurt me i am not scared
    I lied

    When i said i can accept everything
    You can rely on me, trust me
    I lied

    When i swore i'll never cry
    Particularly not for a mere guy
    I lied

    Tell me everything i don't wanna hear
    Sell my soul and drink my tears
    Tell me your love for that girl i hate
    That precious one you can't forget
    I'll smile for you forever
    While dying from pain and anger
    And when i'll say i understand
    Take your time, sweet love,
    For i'll be your rock and your home
    I'll shelter you from the rain
    I'll lie i'll lie i'll lie

    I told myself i could bear this situation
    I'll provide love and unconditional affection
    I lied

    I convinced my friends and family
    I was strong enough and no fool
    I lied

    I may hint how weak i really am
    When you won't listen
    Shut my fire deep down
    Push aside my burden
    Is it to protect you or me?
    Will you unveil my strategy?
    If you open the gate of truth
    It'll blow us out so let me lie to you




    Submitted on 2011-09-14 08:06:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Good work. You are being honest about your feelings.
    | Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      You captured strong feelings with your words. I get it. I feel it. Your words reminded me of a time when I felt the same way...but didn't have the words to describe the feeling. Thanks for sharing.
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    | Posted on 2011-09-14 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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