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    dots Submission Name: Dirty Kittydots
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    Author: nicodemous
    ASL Info:    7-5-82/M/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    5.58 - 283/221/121
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Haiku/Comedy
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    dotsDirty Kittydots
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    Oh, my dirty cat

    White fades gray; brilliant no more

    Would he mind a bath?




    Submitted on 2011-09-15 13:48:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      why was i thinking of Gandalf when i read this...

    mmmm

    cat in bath....yes, good luck with that.

    maybe if you put a tv in the bathroom with animal planet on...something about big cats in africa....might distract him.


    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL. Good luck with that! I've yet to meet a cat who didn't mind water any higher than it's paws. Clever haiku! :)
    Peace!
    ~Kim
    | Posted on 2011-09-15 00:00:00 | by KimmyMim | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, maybe not brilliant to you, but your cat surely must enjoy the ambiguity. I am no longer a white cat, but a grey cat! The most uncertain cat in the whole world. Behold! I am brilliant once more!

    Matt
    | Posted on 2011-09-15 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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