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    dots Submission Name: love is the strangest thing...dots
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    Author: SETmeFREE
    Elite Ratio:    0.98 - 1/1/1
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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       just my thoughts on life and love


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    dotslove is the strangest thing...dots
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    Some days go by faster than others. The mere thought of you can determine that. I have never felt so confused. They say love will do that to you sometimes, but why? I know that just because you don't love me the way that I want you to love me does not mean you don't love me at all, but to know and to feel are two very different things. I KNOW it is not the end of the world, but it FEELS as such when you walk away from me after a fight. I KNOW you are not cheating on me, but it FEELS as such when you ignore my calls. I KNOW i don't hate you, but it FEELS as such when you make me cry. Love has a funny way of making your heart and mind disagree. When your feelings become the truth, then the truth no longer exist. So, which is right? The world is printed in black and white, but your thoughts are paint on a canvas. the truth is, i really don't know. Love has a funny way of doing that though.




    Submitted on 2011-09-15 16:50:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I likey:) This really describes it well.
    | Posted on 2011-09-16 00:00:00 | by Undead37 | [ Reply to This ]


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