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    dots Submission Name: The Fooldots
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    Author: EW61
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 131/71/51
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       I picked a card from the Tarot. The Fool just happens to be the first card (labeled card 0) from the Major Arcana. It symbolizes the leap of faith one must take before embarking on a new path.


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    dotsThe Fooldots
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    Are you calling me?
    Who?
    Can't be
    I'm the Fool
    I'll make you laugh
    I'll entertain
    I'll answer back
    Just play my game
    You keep me in your comfort space
    I'll make you reach
    Don't hide your face
    Your dreams are secrets
    lost at sea
    You dare not speak
    But truth's not free
    Fly below the radar, lie
    Too sad to laugh
    I wonder why?
    My antics can't be classified
    You hit the ground
    Refuse to cry
    The repetition seeds your pain
    Embrace denial
    You're down again
    When hurt consumes
    You cannot see
    My soft shoe antics
    My good deed
    The circle cycle wears you down
    and I'm the witness still
    One day Blind Faith will earn
    your trust
    when you have had your fill





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