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    dots Submission Name: Papawdots
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    Author: blackdemigod13
    Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 56/60/41
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    For the most part, Grandpa was a nice man who liked best to fish,
    He kept his candy in a dish.
    He loved every animal of every kind,
    He was always happy and paid stupid people no mind.
    He was gentle and caring,
    And his personality was very daring.
    It would have been nice to be his friend,
    But he left in the end.
    Maybe one day I'll get my chance,
    And we can have a grandfather/grandaughter dance.

    R.I.P. Papaw
    gone since 1993 but not forgotten




    Submitted on 2011-09-16 09:53:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I never got to meet my grandfathers. They both died before I got the chance as well.
    But I feel the same;

    but not forgotten
    | Posted on 2011-09-16 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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