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Water~*~ Light ~*~ Shadow ~*~

Author: Epiphany
ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342 /2139 /390
Words: 59
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Just inspired lately to write after a period of introspection

Happy day and weekend smiles to share ;-)

Water~*~ Light ~*~ Shadow ~*~

Water Light Shadow
Visions Togetherness
Speaking Volumes
Without Words
As Wind Uplifts
Playing Birds
Soaring SpirITs
Full-O Glide
Divine adventure
BE the ride

Water Light Shadow
Reflective Voice
All is Unreal
In Time
As Poets Capture All
In Rhyme
Nurturing Verse
Perfect Song
Come One, Come All
Sing Along

Epiphany 9-15-2011 Tiffany McAchran

Submitted on 2011-09-16 15:44:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I enjoyed the rhythm, imagery and message of your poem. You captured the feelings of the moment. I agree with the previous comments about caps in general...however "BE the ride " works for me. It reminds me of the lessons I learned in yoga. While practicing the asanas, my teacher would remind us to"Feel the breeze, breath and....just be". Thank you for posting this!


| Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]
  kind of a nice anthem for poets in general...

i like the wording...not that comfortable with all the caps....don't feel those are necessary for emphasis..the words are enough...

"be the ride" yes "be the ride"

reminds me of some lines of "ars poetica"

mute, silent...wordless as a flight of birds...

it is the feel of the words together rather than the words drawing attention to themselves.

| Posted on 2011-09-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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