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    dots Submission Name: Lightmaredots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    dotsLightmaredots
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    little severed head
    all alone and weeping red
    underneath the bed




    Submitted on 2011-09-16 16:51:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was incredibly disturbing. Still, I can't disagree with the fact that Barbie deserves nothing less...
    | Posted on 2011-09-17 00:00:00 | by dancer-of-words | [ Reply to This ]
      this is wonderfully creepy. Halloween is coming soon. pretty awesome.
    | Posted on 2011-09-17 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      during the light of day
    and no one came to play
    is it as they say?

    I love this! Especially the title.
    | Posted on 2011-09-16 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      scary...

    reminds me of when i was a kid...i had this stuffed animal that sometimes i would put under my bed at night...but then i would freak out thinking about it under there staring up being really angry that it was under there...and that it would do something to me in my sleep---

    | Posted on 2011-09-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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