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    dots Submission Name: A little bit Fishy dots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsA little bit Fishy dots
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    Cephalopods make great lovers
    and you can eat them with butter
    when you are through.
    O' blue sea lover true
    you can eat them with butter
    those tentacle suckered lovers.
    After itís all finished itís not over
    because a famished lover gets to cover
    I say simply smother, your slippery lover.
    That wriggly deep dark secret slather
    It in butter. Donít hide undercover.
    Just feast upon the cuddled beast.
    Then go find another
    I promise not to tell.
    Oh hell, if Cephy has a friend
    then itís doubles count me in.




    Submitted on 2011-09-18 00:37:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That ain't right! The butter thing is cool though, being both tasty as well as versatile. It's also yellow, but that's probably just a coincidence.
    | Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      This is just excellent! There is a seriousness to this underneath the humor.

    Lovers that taste good with butter.

    Oh come on, who can't just taste that line.

    Kind of sad as well. If you think about it.

    Matt
    | Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      HAHAHAHAHA!

    This reminds me of some Dr. Ruth thing I heard once where she was advising masturbating with a cucumber then serving it later to your friends in a salad for a laugh... made me think, I will NEVER EVER eat at Dr. Ruth's house... She also suggested a hair brush. That was one kinky midget in her day, obviously...

    The picture... man, the japanese are fucked up people sometimes...

    | Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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