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    dots Submission Name: Vacuitydots
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    Author: KimmyMim
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    A marriage
    without love

    is like a poem
    without words...




    Submitted on 2011-09-18 10:08:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I have written many instrumentals on guitar that had no words yet i feel they were good poetry so the second half of this is kind of problematic for me, yet a marriage without love is like a sad thing that limps toward its destination devoid of human emotion's fidelities, destitute, lost in the contractual obligations of survival. Such a sad state!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2014-01-31 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      We can hope that at one time there were words. Where do they go?
    | Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      and in a poem...the words only work if they blend with other words....to create meaning

    in marriage, giving to each other, compromising, loving is the only way it works...

    blending together like words in a poem...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Yet that poem without words, has a title. And that marriage without love, has an image.

    Our smiles is all they'll see. That pretty illusion of happiness that reads "Forever".

    Interesting write.

    Matt
    | Posted on 2011-09-18 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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