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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Happy
    Total Views: 689
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 512



    Description:
       These are some lyrics from a song I wrote.. hope you enjoy


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    My One And Only

    if love hurts I'm immune to it's pain
    cuz everyday with you is sunny with no rain
    you the only one that helped me maintain
    kept me on track even when I could'nt afford the train
    on my top spot you'll remain
    you my novacain
    stressful nights your love is Advil to my brain
    even thought at times it seem like I'm being vain
    with out you in my life I go insain




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