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    dots Submission Name: Pain dots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    I didn't want to do it, draw the line of blood. but i had to. But for some reason i did. it made me better when i did. maybe everyone is right after all i dont need to be here. like my so call friends so want to be my friends it called they don't care. they just want be tobe gone not here. i just feel like drawing more lines of blood, deep ones.
    i dont think that my family would notice if i was gone. i dont want to be here, cant take anymore.




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