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    dots Submission Name: Love?dots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    Bytes: 494



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    dotsLove?dots
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    How many people think love is a funny word?
    i do
    i don't know how to love anyone,not myself
    it like a monster inside you telling you just one little deep line of blood. i do what it says but i do more then just one little deep line, blood just running down my leg.
    I didn't want to do it but it just made me do it.
    i dont want to be here. ]
    life is hard i cant take it anymore no one cares
    i go away just like everyone want me to .




    Submitted on 2011-09-19 09:32:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awww this is soooo sad!!! I feel like this sometimes too, we all do. People have their insecurites and like to harass others to cover it up. Love is the worst pain of all, and I have been in your position a couple times too. You are a really good writer and I like how you expressed your feelings here. It's a little brief but I like it. Keep writing!!!
    -Alex
    | Posted on 2011-09-25 00:00:00 | by xxalpal4everzxx | [ Reply to This ]


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